nice --- though if you're being self-referential you might perhaps want some imagery in the third stanza ... and I had expected the second line of the second stanza to be something like "Rhyme and meter, sound and rhythm" to (if for only a moment!) be rigidly metric (^_^) ... just my $0.02 ... ^z
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